I made a few extra changes to this draft. I realised that I had overcrowded the page (You could only see Jake's (The boy on the left) head and therefore I felt that I should delete something. I chose to delete the album article as It took up the most room, and it wasn't even that important to the magazine. This gave me a chance to move parts of the magazine around and free it up more. The only problem I have with this draft is the large amount of blank, red space to the left of the page. I will ask a teacher for advice on what to do to this area.
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